Hello dear readers!
I'm glad to have a chance
to express my own ideas concerning interesting issues and hope so are you. Well,
here we go. There are many useful things that we use and wear in our everyday life. That’s why they are produced in a huge amount almost in every country. But have you ever dwelt on what the consequences of usage of such things as plastic bottles, electronic devices, papers and, finally, clothes are? These things really help us and, moreover, we cannot live without using some of them. But getting benefit for ourselves without thinking about other creatures suffering from it may make us selfish and careless, may not it? Almost everything we see around us can be recycled starting from simple pen to huge trucks. The main reason why we have to recycle things we have already used is saving our planet. A lot of years ago nature always took care of humanity by giving places to live, food to eat. And now, when humanity has adapted to environmental conditions it is thanklessly to be careless to our mother.
Here are some tips that can help everyone to recycle his or her own clothes. Any clothes can be donated to a local shelter or cut into pieces and used as wipes. You can refresh your clothing by making a new clothing or giving it to your younger sister or brother.
Before buying things remind yourself how you are going to recycle it and by appropriate recycling clothes you give a chance to future generations for living in the world. Everything begins from you and your decision.
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information is good organized,you have clearly well-constructed paragraphs, but I haven't found subheading
honestly,clearly understood idea of this article
nowadays, this is a very huge problem
I know,you haven't so much time, but would be better,if wrote more information.
Organization: 4
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Quality of information: 5
Hi, Dilara!
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your post, I wanted to use only those things that can be recycled) It's really impressive and written in such a effective way.
My marks are:
Organization:4
Mechanics:5
Quality of information:5
Firstly, I would advise you to split your post into paragraphs because your text is without any divisions. Despite that, there is excellent logical order, which can be traced while reading your post.
The best about your post is its vocabulary, as well as grammar. You used not simple words, what makes your information look and sound nice. Furthermore, I didn't find any faults with grammar.
Finally, information given in this post clearly relates to the topic. There are several details about recycling, helping readers to understood the issue deeper.
Overall, I'm fascinated by how you've written it. Now I have some things to learn from you)
Hello, Alisher! Thanks for commenting, because it is quite useful to know what readers think about my piece of writing and to try to improve writing skills. I will pay attention to organizing my paragraphs in a different way.
DeleteAnd,by the way, while reading your blog I've learnt some new words and grammar phrases as well.
See you tomorrow!
I agree with the most of the comments above, your post is pretty good!
ReplyDeleteThank you! it's interesting to know the opinion of person who has studied the same issue as you've made research on this topic as well.
DeleteHi, Dilara. You work is really interested me. I like decor of you page, and also information given here). So let's assess you, but I think it will be really easy, because you work struck me, even though I was expecting something like that from you.So well organized paragraphs that's why 5. No grammatical, spelling mistakes and for Mechanics 5. Also good quality of information that related to the topic makes your mark for Quality of information to be 5. Well done!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Sorry for grammatical mistakes at that comment, I tried to do as best as I can.
Ooh, what an unexpected comment!
DeleteThank you so much for commenting, because I'm glad that my readers like how I write and it motivates me to write again and again.